Um...... *grurrrrggllleeeeeegrowwwlllll*
The sound reminded me a lot of Kataklysm! Kick ass.
The main riff in the beginning is just pure murder... I immediatley had the urge to growl to it... My girlfriend smacked me... I must of scared the hell out of her lol
Anyway: The second part (starting at 0:21) sounds a little empty, In my opinion, the bass drum should start into a sloppy double bass rhythm, following the rhythm of the guitars, this will give it a lot more momentum, which this part deserves. Not sure if i explained it right... so here:
instead of
Bassdrum: dum dadadumum dum dadaduumdum
Guitar: da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da
I would make it
Bassdrum: da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da
Guitar : da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da da
At the end of the riff I would definitely make the double pass doubletime and include some crashes or a nice fill..
On the other hand, the bass is missing, which could go along nicely to the original bassdrum hits on that part...
Oh well, just some suggestions... I really dig the riffs. Fucking kick ass. PWN.
5/5
CWN