Aw.. with brass.
Ok, that was definitely too much brass.
Some tips.
Turn the brass down.
Drums: Louder.
Guitars: Louder.
I can hardly hear either of them.
The guitars sound sort of fuzzy, I'm guessing you recorded them directly without a mic and amp, get some sort of amp simulation.
Another tip: Play and record the guitar track twice and pan each track all the way left and right, this will give it a full and rich sound.
I see some good potential in the song, keep it up :D