Firstly, great song @ deathkllr
Secondly, awesome job on the vocals. Really fucking grinds the shit of the the riffage. The duality is awesome. Grinding + high pitched screams = pure evil. The pitched voice at 1:53 sounded like an angry Protoss Warrior lol
Doomy.
Nice one.
4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.034)
Haha, thanks dude. Glad you liked it. Doom and gloom, thats my favorite shit. Thanks for the review and vote!
Ahahahahhaha
Awesome stuff lol. Very nice grinding on this, very guttural. Very cool idea by both of you, the lyrics were funny as hell lol. Gonna play this on every christmas party i go to. haha
violent night... hahaha
Great stuff. I don't think santa will visit you this year.
The vocals could be a bit more present, the effect is freakin' awesome, gives it a very roomy apocalyptical sound, just make em a little louder :D
PWN
5ed
Yeah, you should definitely play this at Christmas parties. People will be all 'WTF?!?' and you'll just be like 'Guess what you get for Christmas? METAL!'.
Lawl.
And yes, Santa learned to avoid my house a long time ago.
I think that whole 'wait on the roof with a shotgun' thing kinda scared him away.
Okay, since you're the third person that's asked for louder vocals, I will concede and turn them up some.
Thanks for the review man, I'm glad you dig it.
Metal! \m/
Mmmmm....
... Donuts.
Awesome. Awesome song. Awesome riffage, awesome soli, awesome.
Ok, since this is such high standard, I'll have to be picky haha
at 00:26 i can still hear some guitar noise... Hm...
The part starting at 01:06: The ambient guitar sounds could be a bit quieter, they kind of drown the rest of the mix a little bit...
The rest is awesome. lol
5ed.
Damn man, don't your fingers start bursting up into flames after a while?
Yeah I heard the noise when I was listening with headphones I'll be sure to fix that. Thanks!
Death Metal?
This sounded nothing like progressive death metal... Maybe more like Tool or something. Heavy rock...
The riffage was cool, simple but effective. the build up was kind of... soso.
I totally agree with Twilight. The snare really sounds like me hitting a beer keg with a baseball bat.
The rhythm guitar doesn't really sound very full, because you always panned it to the left and hardly played rhythm left and right simultaniously. I would keep the rhyhtm left and right, and move the lead guitar somewhere into the middle, gives the whole song a much bigger sound. Like you did starting at 2:55. Cool part there. That's metal.
The vocals were sort of random, too. I think Twilight said everything there.
Sounds awefully negative, it's not suppose to be lol.
Nah, tool sucks
Coolness...
I am a total noobz0rzs, this song is by van halen, if i remember correctly, right? I remember the riff... k, let me google it.
Googled.
Awesome job... Yeah, transcribing from guitar to keys is really a bitch. Made me think of an old joke:
How do you get a guitarist to shut up? Place notated sheet music in front of him.
Cool job, really caught the vibe of the song... even though it's techno... lol
METAL!
5ed
hahaha. I agree on all points. You should hear it with the vocals I fucked around with. EVEN lamer. haha.
Thanks for the review, man!
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You definitely have the correct flow, the timing is good, but like the other said... That is no screaming...
Are you trying to inhale scream? Inhale screaming is for deathcore panzies who cannot scream. Scream. SCREAM. Just let the air out, think of something that pisses you off, try not to hurt yourself, once it hurts, you're doing it wrong. Don't be afraid to be loud.
There are many ways to scream, don't try to sound like someone else, everyone's voice is different. Practice screaming into pillows, if you're afraid someone will hear you. lol
METAL!
Keep trying!
Nice lyrics btw.
To be honest... Thats EXACTLY what I'm afraid of... I am kind of holding back because I'm afraid people will think someone trying to rape me or something...
I will find some time this week or maybe next week and try to improve on this.
Thank you for your tips.
damn....
that is some awesome stuff... The song itself is awesome, your vocals are the icing of the cake. Fits perfect. Epic.
You might want to put a longer reverb on the vokills, they sound a little too... Nevermind, it kicks ass. lol
3.52 / 5.00 (+ 0.32)
Yeah, there's actually no reverb at all on them; just delay. Reverb eats too much of my CPU (old-assed computer FTL).
Don't be afraid to voice your opinion, man. I'm not going to go all psycho on you for having an idea.
Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked my paltry addition to the towering behemoth that is this song.
Metal! \m/
Hm, how did I miss this...
Anyway, better late than never!
Awesome track.. really loved the part at 1:12, really has some panteraish sound to it. Creepy tune.
5ed.
(The bassdrum could use a little less bass, it's thumping quite heavily :D )
Ah thanks for the review bro :D. Thanks for the tip about the drumkick, though I can't edit anymore this song therefore I won't update it. Thanks again dude.
Nice....
...duality of the guitars, the hammer-ons were pretty cool :D
Gave the song a really nice feeling, the original track sounds completely empty without the sweet solo over it :D
4.74 / 5.00 (+ 0.078)
Thanks very much, man. Glad you dig it. I love messin with other peoples tracks. haha.
Thanks again, for the review and vote.
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Hmhmmmmmmmmm
It has some nice melodies, but the guitars are BADLY detuned, if you're ears can't hear it, get yourself a tuning device...
Really, the detuned guitar really destroy everything for me....
I know. I was pretty bad with tones. I got myself a chromatic tuner now.
I want to redo this, because I like the melody for this song. Most of my songs need redoing... they are all like out of tune except one or two
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