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[Kitty Metal]

Nice ideas.

Cool ideas, loved the string riding.
Some critique:
The guitar is way to muddy, maybe you like it that way, just my personal opinion. cut down on the distortion a bit :D
Also the timing is a little off (especially at the part starting at 0:17).
A big tip from me personally for getting a great guitar tone:
Record the rhythm guitar twice, pan one guitar left, and the other guitar right. You will get a rich and killer sound like that. Leaving the lead guitar in the center will give it the effect you (i think) wanted to reach at 0:50, where the rhythm sporadically comes in...
One last one: Give that EZDrummer bassdrum some punch! it's completely drowning in the mix!
Cool song!!

[Black Christmas]

Ahhhh yes.

Finally got around to review the original, already added Twilight's vocalized version to my favs.
Good job on metalizing the good ol' German Xmas song. Very black xmas.
just remove the noise of the guitar just before joy to world starts and I'm 100% happy.
Cool idea of just punches both songs together.
Wish I had the time to produce as much music as you, you are a machine!
GJ!
5ed

HappyHomicide responds:

yeah I did remove the noise, i just couldnt reupload because it took away "EDIT" when it front paged. And thanks!

[Piss Coming From My Ass vocals]

dude...

... best lyrics ever.
I had to fucking laugh out loud when i heard this. This is the perfect parody of all metal lyrics combined. LOL
ahahhaaha
perfect. piss is coming from my ass. it feels great HAHAHAHAHHAHAHA
lol just LOL

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Hahahaha, thanks man. Glad to see there are people who share my fucked up sense of humor.

[Quiet Killings]

Very chilly.

Great song, very relaxing. The bassruns were cool. Guitars were soothing. Great stuff once again, my friend!
Only ONE thing: The drums at the part starting at 1:02, repeated at 2:25 and 3:37 are missing some symbol hits... Actually just some bell hits would be enough... It just sounds so empty with only bassdrum and snare playing.
:D
4.01 / 5.00 (+ 0.086)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Ah, yes. I'm not real happy with the drums on this one in spots as well. I'm so lazy with my drums.
I had this one uploaded before but deleted it, mistakenly. Ah well. Its back. Glad you enjoyed!\m/

[*Wolf of Hate*]

Firstly, great song @ deathkllr

Secondly, awesome job on the vocals. Really fucking grinds the shit of the the riffage. The duality is awesome. Grinding + high pitched screams = pure evil. The pitched voice at 1:53 sounded like an angry Protoss Warrior lol
Doomy.
Nice one.
4.32 / 5.00 (+ 0.034)

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

Haha, thanks dude. Glad you liked it. Doom and gloom, thats my favorite shit. Thanks for the review and vote!

[Black Christmas (vocals)]

Ahahahahhaha

Awesome stuff lol. Very nice grinding on this, very guttural. Very cool idea by both of you, the lyrics were funny as hell lol. Gonna play this on every christmas party i go to. haha
violent night... hahaha
Great stuff. I don't think santa will visit you this year.

The vocals could be a bit more present, the effect is freakin' awesome, gives it a very roomy apocalyptical sound, just make em a little louder :D
PWN
5ed

TwilightNecrosis responds:

Yeah, you should definitely play this at Christmas parties. People will be all 'WTF?!?' and you'll just be like 'Guess what you get for Christmas? METAL!'.
Lawl.
And yes, Santa learned to avoid my house a long time ago.
I think that whole 'wait on the roof with a shotgun' thing kinda scared him away.
Okay, since you're the third person that's asked for louder vocals, I will concede and turn them up some.
Thanks for the review man, I'm glad you dig it.
Metal! \m/

[Godmodeon-Xeno/Mj]

Mmmmm....

... Donuts.
Awesome. Awesome song. Awesome riffage, awesome soli, awesome.
Ok, since this is such high standard, I'll have to be picky haha
at 00:26 i can still hear some guitar noise... Hm...
The part starting at 01:06: The ambient guitar sounds could be a bit quieter, they kind of drown the rest of the mix a little bit...
The rest is awesome. lol
5ed.

Damn man, don't your fingers start bursting up into flames after a while?

Metaljonus responds:

Yeah I heard the noise when I was listening with headphones I'll be sure to fix that. Thanks!

[Silent Echo]

Death Metal?

This sounded nothing like progressive death metal... Maybe more like Tool or something. Heavy rock...
The riffage was cool, simple but effective. the build up was kind of... soso.
I totally agree with Twilight. The snare really sounds like me hitting a beer keg with a baseball bat.
The rhythm guitar doesn't really sound very full, because you always panned it to the left and hardly played rhythm left and right simultaniously. I would keep the rhyhtm left and right, and move the lead guitar somewhere into the middle, gives the whole song a much bigger sound. Like you did starting at 2:55. Cool part there. That's metal.
The vocals were sort of random, too. I think Twilight said everything there.
Sounds awefully negative, it's not suppose to be lol.

BloodFest responds:

Nah, tool sucks

[Ain't talking bout love(techno]

Coolness...

I am a total noobz0rzs, this song is by van halen, if i remember correctly, right? I remember the riff... k, let me google it.
Googled.
Awesome job... Yeah, transcribing from guitar to keys is really a bitch. Made me think of an old joke:
How do you get a guitarist to shut up? Place notated sheet music in front of him.

Cool job, really caught the vibe of the song... even though it's techno... lol
METAL!
5ed

Bad-Man-Incorporated responds:

hahaha. I agree on all points. You should hear it with the vocals I fucked around with. EVEN lamer. haha.

Thanks for the review, man!

[Await the Retribution with vox]

..........

You definitely have the correct flow, the timing is good, but like the other said... That is no screaming...
Are you trying to inhale scream? Inhale screaming is for deathcore panzies who cannot scream. Scream. SCREAM. Just let the air out, think of something that pisses you off, try not to hurt yourself, once it hurts, you're doing it wrong. Don't be afraid to be loud.
There are many ways to scream, don't try to sound like someone else, everyone's voice is different. Practice screaming into pillows, if you're afraid someone will hear you. lol
METAL!
Keep trying!
Nice lyrics btw.

7isgod responds:

To be honest... Thats EXACTLY what I'm afraid of... I am kind of holding back because I'm afraid people will think someone trying to rape me or something...

I will find some time this week or maybe next week and try to improve on this.

Thank you for your tips.